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Tuesday, October 04, 2005

தொலையா நினைவுகள்...

(thanglish format in the comments section)

சல சலக்கும் ஓடை
கல கலக்கும் மணியோசை
இவற்றின் நடுவே

பச்சை பசேலென ஒரு
வயல் வெளியில், நிதானமான
காலைப் பொழுது

ஹ்ம்ம்ம்...

வாழ்வில் தொலைந்து
போன அப்பள்ளி
விடுமுறையை எண்ணியே

நாட்களைக் கழிக்கும்
ஒரு நகரவாசியின்
பெருமூச்சு...



(அச்சிறு விஷயங்களைத் தேடி ஒரு சில வெளியூர் பயணங்கள் மேற்கொள்வது, வேறு விஷயம்!!! இருந்தாலும் அந்த சுகம் தனி சுகம் தான்....)

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15 Comments:

Blogger Ram.C said...

tholaiyaa ninaivugaL...

sala salakkum oodai
kala kalakkum maNiyoosai
ivaRRin naduvee

pachchai pacheelena oru
vayal veLiyil, -nithaanamaana
kaalaip pozuthu

-hmmm...

vaazhvil tholainthu
poona appaLLi
vidumuRaiyai eNNiyee

-naatkaLaik kazhikkum
oru nagaravaasiyin
perumuuchchu...

(achchiRu vishayangkaLaith theedi oru sila veLiyuur payaNangkaL meeRkoLvathu, veeRu vishayam!!! irunthaalum antha sugam thani sugam thaan....)

padaththaip perithaakki rasikkavum
pada uthavi: kaarththiyin valaippathivu

Tuesday, October 04, 2005 3:03:00 PM  
Anonymous Raju said...

arumaiyana kavithai... appadi rasikkanumna nallaa neervalam ulla oru village venum..

It reminds me of a village on the banks of Kaveri near Karur, called 'Chinthalavaadi'.. We went to do seva for a 'Narasimha' temple there.. Nice clear kaveri, green fields, no pollution, hundreds of ducks, etc.. Such a lovely day it was.. Would love to visit all those temples on the banks of Kaveri and her sisters sometime.. :-)

Tuesday, October 04, 2005 5:42:00 PM  
Blogger vee-jay said...

neengaLuma, indha weekend dhaan enga amma-oda poorviga graamam-ku poittu vandhaen and have written about it. So true - "vaazhvil tholainthu poona appaLLi vidumuRaiyai eNNiyee naatkaLaik kazhikkum oru nagaravaasiyin perumuuchchu..."

Tuesday, October 04, 2005 7:15:00 PM  
Blogger Kaps said...

En Iniya Damil Makkale.....

eppavumpola....kavidhai arumaiyilum arumai.

Tuesday, October 04, 2005 10:36:00 PM  
Blogger JVC said...

mmm, nenaichu enna seyya? oru super padatha poettu ninaivellaam kindi vidureengalae ram!!

Tuesday, October 04, 2005 10:54:00 PM  
Blogger caleb said...

hey nice poem! sadly i never lived in a village but i've watched enough tamil movies to know what you're talkin about!

cheers!

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 4:23:00 AM  
Blogger IBH said...

sigh! missing my kukkiramam so much! :(

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 6:31:00 AM  
Blogger IBH said...

sigh! missing my kukkiramam so much! :(

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 6:31:00 AM  
Blogger IBH said...

sigh! missing my kukkiramam so much! :(

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 6:32:00 AM  
Blogger யாத்திரீகன் said...

the 2nd snap was too gud.. sir.. & obviously the line within the braces than the poem itself ;-)

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 10:48:00 AM  
Blogger Ganesh said...

Ram very nice one.
And picture is so refreshing.
Neenga eduthadha, endha ooru idhu

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 12:40:00 PM  
Blogger Ram.C said...

Raju.. definitely we guys are missing it...

VJ.. should be a coincidence :-) :-)

kaps... captain katchi aarambichuttaru.. jakkirathai...

JVC.. hope that rekindling makes you to visit some places soon..

caleb.. thankx :-)

ibh.. i can understand your feelings, 3 fold... :-) :-)

senthil.. thankx for dropping by.. I too liked the second one.

Ganesh.. picture courtesy - karthy (As I had given in the link below my post)

Wednesday, October 05, 2005 10:30:00 PM  
Blogger thennavan said...

Kattodu kuzhalaada aada, aada
Kannendra meenaada aada, aada

Neer vannam engum mevida nanjai punjaigal paaradee
Oor vannam enna koorume devalogame dhaanadee
Verengu sendra podhilum indha inbangal yethadee

:-)

Thursday, October 06, 2005 10:25:00 AM  
Blogger Ram.C said...

thennavan...

last line - summa 'nachchu'nu irukku....

Thursday, October 06, 2005 3:08:00 PM  
Blogger susubala said...

Iam a nature addict and my dream is to spend lots of days in Village. Village vazhkaiyai anubavikka romba asaiyai irrukku. Antha asaiku oru adikkal unathu kavithai.

Wednesday, October 12, 2005 2:19:00 AM  

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